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Score: 5
Tims Naked Quiz 2

"Next time"

submission: Tims Naked Quiz 2
date: January 25, 2005

Please put in pictures of your mother like you mentioned in your author's comments.

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Score: 8
Make war not love

"Sweet"

submission: Make war not love
date: June 16, 2004

I liked that, you did really well with the frame-by-frame there. It could have stood to be a bit longer, of course, and I thought the gradient background in the one shot took away from the animation. But it was definitely good overall.

How long did that take you, out of curiosity? Also, what were you using to draw? Did you do everything in Flash? Did you use a tablet?

I'm looking forward to seeing your future works.

Author's Response:

i made it for 4 hours with pauses
yes i did every thing at flash.
and dont laugh now but what is a tablet?
(im from sweden u know)

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Score: 7
Scorched

"Good style"

submission: Scorched
date: June 7, 2004

You're right, the game itself could still use some polish. But you have very good style -- I was caught at the preloader. Don't stop working on this game, I'm sure it could get a daily award, especially if you can program some AI (I know how difficult that is, but keep at it!).

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Score: 9
Regis_Cartoons ART

"Holy cow!"

submission: Regis_Cartoons ART
date: May 30, 2004

That is some great artwork there! Good job on that! I can't wait to see what you do with your friend's pictures, either!

Author's Response:

pieoncar ! Thanx for a great mark. I'm very glad that you liked my art. BTW, I'm drawing more than 17 years and photoshoping - only two weeks :)

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Score: 8
Mice - Game

"I liked this"

submission: Mice - Game
date: May 24, 2004

But it was definitely incomplete -- there was no way to lose or anything, was there? I think you could really use this idea creatively in another game, though -- maybe have multiple glowing balls moving on a track or something, for a start. I'd definitely be interested in seeing a "sequel" to this that took this idea and ran.

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Score: 4
hour of darkness demo

"Nice, but..."

date: April 27, 2004

This really isn't ready to be out there yet. It definitely looks like you have the foundations for a good game, but you should wait till you have more functionality before you release any kind of demo. It does a good job of showcasing what you can do, but this doesn't really have much entertainment value. I'll be looking forward to the finished version.

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Score: 7
Farmer Joe & Donkey Paul

"Amusing"

date: April 26, 2004

The gameplay by itself is pretty amusing, certainly more than enough to hold my attention. Very nice concept ;) Plus, since so many people here love hentai, this should do pretty well. My only gripe: I want to turn off the music. Can we have an option for that? Otherwise, good job.

Author's Response:

- "My only gripe: I want to turn off the music. Can we have an option for that?"

Done...

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Score: 7
FlashTrek

"Needs instructions, bad"

submission: FlashTrek
date: April 25, 2004

This game needs instructions, bad. I sort of figured out how to play, which involves clicking on those icons at the bottom right. The dock button lets you dock at places where your ship can stop, the scan button turns the map (the dots on the screen) on/off while the +/- buttons next to it change the scale of the map. Engage warp gives you a huge speed boost if you're already in motion, disengage warp turns it off. You can probably figure out the rest.

This game needs instructions soon so it doesn't get blammed! It looks like it has huge potential.

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Score: 7
blobmen lemmings

"Enormous potential"

submission: blobmen lemmings
date: April 24, 2004

This game has enormous potential... All the addiction of the original Lemmings games packed into a really small flash file. It needs more of an interface, as a previous reviewer said, and noises and music would help too. Keep working on this game, it will be great.

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Score: 10
Final Fantasy A+

"Ridiculously cool"

submission: Final Fantasy A+
date: April 23, 2004

Holy crap, where to start...

First, I can't believe you did all this for a high school final. Talk about going above and beyond.

Next, your Japanese was dead-on. I'm not a native speaker, but everything sounded correct. Translations were done excellently too, but they should be, since you made it :) I'm impressed at how well you speak Japanese for being in high school. There are people in my 3rd semester course here at college who would have been lost.

I really enjoyed the couple little things that you had to know some Japanese for -- Shiken as the one boss plus the double meaning between the name and kanji, the Mahou eraser ... :)

Also, the sounds and music are done excellently, as are the voices. The animations are a lot better than so many of the entries here, too.

My -only- gripe would be to add a restart button at the end, rather than having it automatically restart, and maybe have a preloading screen leading up to the start/continue screen, where you have some "I'd rather start my save game" message if you click on the start button rather than the continue button. But these don't take away from the enjoyment of the movie at all.

The bottom line is that this is an absolutely awesome movie. Great work!

Author's Response:

Thanks for noticing the Shiken pun! I'm really proud of that one. I actually don't plan on altering the beginning, 'cause that's the way it was made for presentation (originally it was exported as an .avi file on CD). But I did make a preloader. Maybe I'll put scene selection into there, even though it might seem more clever to put it in as save slots.

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